I am lost in this world

At 9 pm a 10 year old girl was sleeping in the arms of her bother peacefully while her brother keep watching for they drunken father to come in and hit one of them. All her brother could hear was foot step walking down the hall but not just one of them loads. The foot steps stop out side the door so the hind the little girl some where so she did get hurt and waited, the door knob turned opened a dark mice came in who started hitting him but un lucky for them both the little saw what was happening and that was the last she saw of him.

8 years later

On a typical morning on Mars at around 9:30, A white mouse was waking up with a headache from the night before when she and Carbine were drinking which Carbine won. She gave Carbine a run for her money.
As she was getting up she fell over all her stuff on the floor which she forgot to pick up, she started to make her way to the bath when she fell down and fell a sleep. She also happened to be the most messiest mouse in the base.
Suddenly there came a knock at the door but she could not be asked to answer the door at all then a voice came.
“Cherry Blossom get up NNNOOOWWW” A male voice shouted
“ I am up just let me get washed and dressed ok dick head” Cherry Blossom said looking at the door.
“ok I will give you 5min but I am not leaving” the mouse yelled in response.
“ok already just don‘t shout, my head killing me” she shouted making her way to the bath room to get washed. May I mention she also tripped over the floor as well.
As soon as she got washed she went in her in to the bed room and pick out a pink mini skirt, top also with long boots and put them on when she done that she look in the mirror to see if she was pretty. She didn’t think so, so she changed. She put on some black track bottoms with strap top and black boots.
“Are you done yet” The male called fed up of waiting, may I mention she also took the longest in the bathroom.
“I am done are you happy now” she asked watching him look at her up and down. She went to see how Carbine was doing. And as it turned out worse then she was. Cherry Blossom laughed as she listened to Carbine row with someone on the phone that turned out to be Throttle.
Carbine ended the call and looked up. “Cherry Blossom, bloody hell you look better then me!” She giggled. “You have the day off!” She laughed and made a call.